sometimes the rhymes won’t come
or the only ones I can think of are dumb
so I sit and scribble away
but I know I’m going to throw it away
I can’t think of any subject at all
there’s nothing inspires me at all
everything I write down has been said before
every subject I choose has been chosen before
i come up with something that I think is quite good
then when I get home I read it and it seems to have absolutely no rhythm whatsoever let alone any real point and the chances of anyone wanting to read it are zilch
and I wonder to myself
has the well dried up
arrggh there’s another thing! predictable cliched metaphor alert!
I’ll be sat on the train feeling inspired
yet I’m sat opposite someone snoring and tired
their stretched out feet are kicking my legs
or is slumped in their seat
my shoulder a rest for their head
or shouting into their idamn imobile phone ithingy
“I’m on the train, where are you?”
“sorry, didn’t catch that, reception’s bad, I’m on the train”
but I’ll keep on writing because one day it will work again one day
predictable clumsy rhyme alert!
anyway, that’s what the motivational gurus would probably say
if they got the chance which they won’t
-8-8-8-8-8-8-
dedicated to all of you out there who sometimes struggle for inspiration, it will find you.

Great pic! Cheers
Wonderful!
I can definitely relate.
Really cool image–love it!
Remarkable image Malcolm
Is this a montage? It’s great! and I love this piece as well. I like the way you have it formatted.